修改建议(Re-write)
为了投中 Database (Oxford)、BMC Plant Biology 或 Horticulture Research,你需要把语气从“生物学发现”转变为“生物信息学工程”。
Title (题目)
目前的题目:
Abstract (摘要精修版)
我重新帮你写了一版。请注意这一版是如何规避“需要实验”的坑,并**强调“工具属性”**的。
Revised Abstract:
[Background] The genus Artocarpus encompasses ~70 species, including economically significant crops like jackfruit and breadfruit, which are vital for tropical food security and timber. However, breeding for climate resilience is currently hindered by the fragmentation of genomic resources and the lack of a centralized data repository. [The "Product" - 强调系统构建] To bridge this gap, we constructed the Artocarpus Genome Database (ArGD), a comprehensive multi-omics hub designed to facilitate data-driven breeding. Unlike scattered datasets, ArGD systematically integrates and standardizes high-quality genome assemblies from seven Artocarpus species, coupled with extensive transcriptomic datasets across various tissues and stress conditions. [Technical Features - 强调功能而非结果] Beyond basic data retrieval, ArGD features a suite of advanced visualization and analysis modules, including JBrowse for structural variation viewing, interactive synteny blocks for evolutionary analysis, and dynamic expression profiling (heatmaps/volcano plots). [The "Case Study" framing - 这是一个功能,不是一个发现] Distinct from general databases, ArGD incorporates specialized "Gene Family Analysis Modules". These tailored workflows allow users to efficiently explore complex secondary metabolism-related families—such as TPS, ADH, and BAHD—providing rapid insights into fruit quality formation and stress defense without requiring local computational resources. [Conclusion] By offering a user-friendly interface for comparative genomics and functional mining, ArGD serves as a robust community resource that significantly accelerates the identification of molecular markers and supports molecular breeding in Artocarpus.
3. 修改前 vs. 修改后 对比
维度
你的原版 (易被拒)
修改版 (安全)
核心动词
Identify (识别), Find (发现)
Integrate (整合), Facilitate (促进), Enable (赋能)
关于基因家族
"Identifying ADH/TPS families" (我们在做识别)
"Specialized modules for analyzing ADH/TPS" (我们提供识别的工具)
关于目的
Gene discovery (基因发现)
Accelerating research / Community resource (加速研究/社区资源)
给编辑的感觉
一篇生信分析报告,顺便做了个网。
一个精心搭建的科研基础设施/平台。
Section: Technical Advances in Plant Science (植物科学技术进步)
3. 操作建议
如果你想挽回这篇稿子在 Frontiers 的命运,请按以下步骤操作:
步骤 A:修改 Cover Letter 和 投稿声明
你需要明确告诉编辑,你之前选错了板块,现在申请转到正确的板块。
"We previously submitted this manuscript to the 'Functional and Applied Plant Genomics' section and were rejected due to a lack of wet-lab validation. However, we believe this was a mismatch in section selection. Our manuscript describes a community resource/database (ArGD), not a hypothesis-driven functional study. Therefore, we represent this work for consideration in the section 'Technical Advances in Plant Science', where the focus is on methodologies and resources. We have demonstrated the utility of this resource through a comprehensive case study."